This is a bit of a long one, if you have the time to read it?
Question by Poppy: This is a bit of a long one, if you have the time to read it?
What do you think?
You say that I’m abrasive now,
a rusty spanner in your works
Sandpapering your skin, oh how
I wish you didn’t need me still,
although you do and always will
I was a cog before I flew,
the oil that kept your movements smooth
and steady, then I looked at you
and saw my future, saw my end
I saw my path begin to bend
Away from you I knew I’d grow,
of course still bound by our shared roots
that’s something I cannot let go
You know that it was killing me
A sapling dies by shade from trees
In my defence I kept it up,
that damn machine that broke my back
I like to think I held a cup
when looked inside appeared quite full
…but god your kickbacks cut awful
I didn’t jump like how you said
at any opportunity
I only rushed to save my head
from destiny’s sharp guillotine,
it spooked me with its looming gleam
So tell me that I turned my back,
but don’t point to the ones in yours
I shifted to a better track
An eagle cannot just devolve
into a dove when blood’s involved
I came back and I squashed your nest
Oh, eagle, you’re not welcome here
Revert back to what you know best
You’re wounded and I am the sand
so deep within your bleeding hand
Then don’t keep pressing on the point
I gained when all my sides were filed
And couldn’t get into the joint
(So guarded by square-looking pegs)
I’d fit in if I were to beg…
Devolve, as in the opposite of evolve.
Best answer:
Answer by Matt
It’s very thought provoking. It moved me to read you piece. Thank you.
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I liked it, Great Job at writing it, i feel the emotion in it. Keep it up
~~Erin~~
it is not so long, I have missed your poems. the last line is flipping me backards and forards.. and it does work, I was saying it doesn’t but yes it does, so I am arguing with myself.. sheesh…
an eagle cannot just de or evolve?
Very thought provoking
i liked it!
I love it, and yes, I do understand this one. Not the happiest of subjects, but it is really great writing. Keep your head up.
Inconsistent rhyme scheme.
great read makes one think, keep up the great work.
take care
dave
Good poem, a little hard to follow though. You can find my poetry at http://www.unitedworldpoets.com/.