I just wrote this…do you like it?
Friday, August 13th, 2010 at
4:21 pm
Question by Jenny: I just wrote this…do you like it?
Another time another place
Perhaps a different night
What seems so wrong at the moment
May some day be right
Revolving
Like clockwork
Around lifes precious machine
Play the game
Make the scene
To bitter to chew
To sweet to spit out
Savor the moment
Don’t drown it with doubt
Thoughts racing
Dreams escaping
Spinning confusion
Trembling, shaking
Purge the silence
Break the chains
That forever bind
What beauty remains
Best answer:
Answer by Evil D
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i love it, its really nice do you write alot of poetry?
your good dood.
i wish you were on my team.
I remember reading this some where else before.
Not the same words but close.
You high, right?
Yeah.
Very nice. Interesting thoughts.
i like it, it’s written very well but the start does seem a bit familiar.
It is pretty descent maybe a little work in the middle.
This sounds familiar it is good though.
okay
Very nice. I think I understand what you mean.
Too bitter and too sweet. Yeah, I write too.
AND THE NOBEL GOES TO ……..
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love it…
i like the way you use your form of vocabulary. never i have heard such beautiful and colorful language and the end rhyming you use is very comfortable
your tone is just about perfect but may be a bit off so work in that ok ? you may be the next Robert frost